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    Quality of help in writing my memoirs:

    "I embarked on this task about a year ago because I thought I had a good basic story
    to tell in my memoirs, which I wanted to leave to my family as part of a legacy. It was
    about my experiences as a battalion surgeon in Vietnam. I had kept a detailed diary
    while I was there and I decided to expand upon it.

    My wife read part of it and rudely proclaimed, "You need help." She was right.

    I turned to John K. Crane of  "eldoradowriting.com" and received excellent assistance.  
    My English 101 was not enough for me to carry the day and get my thoughts
    expressed in a precise, grammatical manner.  This university English full professor
    pointed out endless examples of disjointed thoughts, medical and military jargon not
    understood by the average reader and flight of ideas with no relation to previous
    thoughts.

    His comments, written in the margins of my rough draft, were right on target. The
    quality of his assistance was outstanding.  My memoirs are now interesting and
    readable by everyone.  I couldn't have possibly done this without his excellent
    assistance."
                                          --  --William B. Moore, M.D.


    "Thanks very much indeed for your wise thoughts and suggestions on my short story .
    I will follow up with some approaches to kids' publishers and monitor the market
    through a periodic newsletter Write4Kids. "
                                           
                                             --Fred Orr, Australia


    "Jack Crane's extensive experience as an accomplished writer of best-selling fiction,
    as well as the author of incisive and witty analyses of political action and inaction,
    have pushed him into a small but envious crowd of analysts who are not afraid to
    express themselves in modern, concise English.  When I asked him to help me
    review my book on The Wines of Baja California, Jack launched into an enthusiastic
    revelation of every passive voice I had unknowingly inserted among the bottles of wine
    that I had described.  In short, he quickly reacquainted me with the power and vitality of
    the active voice.  In doing so, he helped me create a far more lively and interesting
    book.  Subsequent favorable reviews, I'm certain, reflected Jack's invisible but sharp
    pen where he had suggested structural and stylistic improvements.

    As a former Professor of English, and a successful professional writer, Jack proves
    his skills by applying creatively the structure and form of our language in powerful
    written and spoken terms."

                                            --Ralph Amey, The Wines of Baja California


    "Dr. Crane came to the rescue when my creative juices seemed to evaporate while I
    attempted to complete my manuscript. His incisive edits and perceptive suggestions
    made all the difference. Take it from me...utilizing a true professional of his
    impeccable credentials, especially when you experience writer's block of the highest
    order, is really a 'no-brainer'!"

                                                                   --Gil Sperry, Mariachi for Gringos
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